J. Haux

Hi! I'm Jacquie! Welcome! I'm fairly new, too! :D

I like it!

Hi! I'm Jacquie. I'm fourteen, but I don't have a boyfriend or a website. Sorry. :wink: Welcome to YWS...I'm fairly new, too. (Come talk on the chatroom sometime)

Hey Curlygirly! I'm Jacquie (J. Haux). I am fairly new, but I'm glad you're here! What genres do you like to write?

Aha! I thought you were a poet! I liked this, especially because I love storms and lightning (even though I'm afraid of it 8- as much as she did. She ...

they sound a little that how British guys really are? I could probably have answered that...ha ha! :D I love it! Ha ha! I think this is my favorite one ...

No, it's the part that makes it funny, um... * giggle * :wink:

Agree. :D I'll read back over it later. Right now I need a lot of sleep. One thing: Please don't...don't...jerk us back to reality by talking at the end. Maybe ...

Chapter Four “My mother is going to kill me, just so you know,” he announced to Landon and Max as he rolled down the window. “ Dead. She told me ...

Psht! Wouldn't discourage me...but you're doing the right thing. I think the weakest chapter is the second. I like the others a lot. Whoops. I forgot to quote.

I love those guys! :D I didn't get that paragraph either, until I read it again. She's looking at the house across the way, remember? And she saw him disappear--that's ...

Very good. You've roused my curiosity. :D “Kitten.” A voice whispered in her ear like a soft breeze on a warm summer’s day.. The hallway was deserted except for the ...

Yes-do clarify that she's not human. I knew because I *cough* scrolled down and glanced at your comment. Your descriptions are beautiful. I second *singsoffkey*, though, on the electric vs. ...

There wasn't a lot of action in this chapter. You gave us a little info about the dad (possible foreshadowing?) and some questions raised. Did he know about her power? ...

Well. I'm glad this is on here.